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good job, but

here are the things I found wrong:
in the part of the song with the chords, you paused too long in between them. Practice that.

the upper part got too boring after a while. Try some new chords.

the bass was to loud compared to the upper part

no main tune

it stayed the same a lot... you need to variate

please reply soon!

Dudidum responds:

Well do you play any instrument so you can say 'practice that' :-?
Perhaps I planned it so ;) and there is of course a main tune... the first 4 chords of the bass ;)

Well I can rarely improve the things you found wrong because I'm playing like that!

The only thing i could improve is the variation of chords but if I do that it will sound almost like one of my improvisation and I wanted to try something new ;)

Thanks for your review!

Good job

Although, the lower part was a little loud. Try to improve that.

Denvish responds:

YES BOSS =D

Umm... short, sleezy

okay... first off, the voices suck. second off, it's too short.

Ryanitto responds:

third, hey look at this... the song's still up there on the classical song list

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zwtf fuck this!

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