Score: 6

"good job, but"

submission: [Dud] Adventure Music 2

date: December 12, 2004

here are the things I found wrong:
in the part of the song with the chords, you paused too long in between them. Practice that.

the upper part got too boring after a while. Try some new chords.

the bass was to loud compared to the upper part

no main tune

it stayed the same a lot... you need to variate

please reply soon!

Score: 5

"That did not loop well"

submission: Dainty Loop Duet

date: November 21, 2004

try ending on a 5th.

Score: 8

"Good job"

submission: Loser's Air (34 sec loop)

date: October 14, 2004

Although, the lower part was a little loud. Try to improve that.

Score: 6

"To quiet"

submission: Knottenthrest - drift ice

date: October 13, 2004

I had to turn my speakers way up to hear it, and by then the sound quality stunk. Good job on the variations. Try not to change instruments so quickly.Gets repetitive, speed up the theme, do a chramatic scale, something.

Score: 0

"Umm... short, sleezy"

submission: Vampire Theme

date: October 11, 2004

okay... first off, the voices suck. second off, it's too short.