good job, but
here are the things I found wrong:
in the part of the song with the chords, you paused too long in between them. Practice that.
the upper part got too boring after a while. Try some new chords.
the bass was to loud compared to the upper part
no main tune
it stayed the same a lot... you need to variate
please reply soon!
Well do you play any instrument so you can say 'practice that' :-?
Perhaps I planned it so ;) and there is of course a main tune... the first 4 chords of the bass ;)
Well I can rarely improve the things you found wrong because I'm playing like that!
The only thing i could improve is the variation of chords but if I do that it will sound almost like one of my improvisation and I wanted to try something new ;)
Thanks for your review!
That did not loop well
try ending on a 5th.
Although, the lower part was a little loud. Try to improve that.
YES BOSS =D
I had to turn my speakers way up to hear it, and by then the sound quality stunk. Good job on the variations. Try not to change instruments so quickly.Gets repetitive, speed up the theme, do a chramatic scale, something.
Umm... short, sleezy
okay... first off, the voices suck. second off, it's too short.
third, hey look at this... the song's still up there on the classical song list
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